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Offline Louis

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abandoned
« on: June 11, 2012, 05:51:43 AM »
once,
afloat
on the vast ocean
of your deepset love.

now,
just driftwood,
abandoned
on a rocky shore.

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Offline Angelica

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Re: abandoned
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2012, 08:29:54 AM »
Oh man,  too sad.
But still beauts.
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Offline Ah Willa

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Re: abandoned
« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2012, 11:33:20 AM »
so little
so much
Louis you really now how to use words powerful!

With a few words, you relayed a love story with a sad ending ...

beautiful!
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Offline PM

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Re: abandoned
« Reply #3 on: June 12, 2012, 06:25:12 PM »
Baie mooi Louis, ek wens jy het 'n skets gehad wat ons daarby kon gebruik.
Ek het darem 'n pragtige foto wat ook mooi daarby sal pas.
« Last Edit: June 12, 2012, 06:33:50 PM by PM »
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Om te weet is om te verstaan.

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Re: abandoned
« Reply #4 on: June 13, 2012, 07:32:26 AM »
so mooi ek moes bietjie speel
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