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Offline Louis

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Turmoil
« on: August 10, 2013, 03:13:00 PM »
Turmoil


Effervescent
winters moonlight
shimmering bubbles
permeate the night
misty fleeces
shuffle across the sky
eerie the glow
from a satellite racing by
Rhythmically
a heart is beating
shallow
the steady sound of breathing
tumultuous
the turmoil of a mind pondering
contemplating
questioning, seeking always wondering

…about you

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Offline Angelica

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Re: Turmoil
« Reply #1 on: August 10, 2013, 05:59:48 PM »
Oe.. weer een van daai diep gedigte.
Pragtig.
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Re: Turmoil
« Reply #2 on: August 11, 2013, 06:02:09 AM »
Baie mooi Louis, soos altyd.  Ek hoop jy spaar al vir die volgende boek. 
Om te weet is om te verstaan.