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Kom skryf saam in jou eie plekkie => Kom deel jou woordwerke => Louis se plek => Topic started by: Louis on August 10, 2013, 03:13:00 PM

Title: Turmoil
Post by: Louis on August 10, 2013, 03:13:00 PM

Turmoil


Effervescent
winters moonlight
shimmering bubbles
permeate the night
misty fleeces
shuffle across the sky
eerie the glow
from a satellite racing by
Rhythmically
a heart is beating
shallow
the steady sound of breathing
tumultuous
the turmoil of a mind pondering
contemplating
questioning, seeking always wondering

…about you

© Louis

Title: Re: Turmoil
Post by: Angelica on August 10, 2013, 05:59:48 PM

Oe.. weer een van daai diep gedigte.
Pragtig.

Title: Re: Turmoil
Post by: PM on August 11, 2013, 06:02:09 AM

Baie mooi Louis, soos altyd.  Ek hoop jy spaar al vir die volgende boek.