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Title: Werk zonder naam 3...
Post by: Angelica on May 22, 2013, 06:57:03 PM

With eyes closed I see your beauty in the mirror of my mind.  I behold your emerald eyes and the sparkle of your lipstick in the candle light.  You must have heard my cry tonight, for you came in a flowing robe of white and touched my longing heart with the softness of your smile.  Yet, now you are gone, a mirage against my wall, but still your fragrance lingers in the midnight of my dreams.

Cornelis.

Title: Re: Werk zonder naam 3...
Post by: PM on May 25, 2013, 09:45:25 AM

Dit is baie mooi geskryf.  Wat dink julle van "Mirage"?

Mirage

With eyes closed,
I see your beauty in the mirror of my mind. 
I behold your emerald eyes
and the sparkle of your lipstick in the candle light. 
You must have heard my cry tonight,
for you came in a flowing robe of white
and touched my longing heart
with the softness of your smile. 
Yet,
now you are gone,
a mirage against my wall,
but still your fragrance lingers
in the midnight of my dreams.

© Cornelis.

Title: Re: Werk zonder naam 3...
Post by: Cornelis on May 27, 2013, 11:44:05 AM

Dankie, die een is ook reg, Mirage

Title: Re: Werk zonder naam 3...
Post by: PM on May 27, 2013, 02:11:09 PM

Dankie, ek plaas dit dan so in die boek.