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Kom skryf saam in jou eie plekkie => Kom deel jou woordwerke => Cornelis se plek => Topic started by: Angelica on May 21, 2013, 07:06:17 PM

Title: Werk sonder naam...
Post by: Angelica on May 21, 2013, 07:06:17 PM
The rays of light playfully tints your hair in bronze flames, dancing in the midst of dark shadows in between.  I reach out to touch the sparkling flow of wild fire, red streams of bouncing locks.  They come and go in rhythmic interpretations of your gracious body as you move in tandem with the wind.  And I am blown away by you…..
and by the wind

©Cornelis
Title: Re: Werk sonder naam...
Post by: PM on May 22, 2013, 06:55:18 AM
Sun dance?
Title: Re: Werk sonder naam...
Post by: Fransi on May 22, 2013, 08:20:49 AM
Besonders mooi geskryf en ek lief PM se voorstel vir die titel.
Title: Re: Werk sonder naam...
Post by: PM on May 22, 2013, 09:41:36 AM
Sun Dance

The rays of light
playfully tints your hair in bronze flames,
dancing in the midst of dark shadows in between.  
I reach out to touch the sparkling flow of wild fire,
red streams of bouncing locks.  
They come and go in rhythmic interpretations
of your gracious body
as you move in tandem with the wind,  
and I am blown away by you….. and by the wind.

©Cornelis
Title: Re: Werk sonder naam...
Post by: Angelica on May 22, 2013, 06:09:26 PM
Excellent!!!
Title: Re: Werk sonder naam...
Post by: PM on May 25, 2013, 10:11:00 AM
Dankie julle, ek waardeer, wonder net wat dink Cornelis daarvan. 
Title: Re: Werk sonder naam...
Post by: Cornelis on May 27, 2013, 11:40:22 AM
Hi, Die titel sun dance is mooi. dankie. so aanvaar.
Cornelis
Title: Re: Werk sonder naam...
Post by: PM on May 27, 2013, 02:13:44 PM
Wow, ek wens dit was so maklik om my eie werk te benoem.  Die gedigte het eintlik sommer self die titels gekies, dit is uitstekend. 
Title: Re: Werk sonder naam...
Post by: Meraai vannie Baai on September 28, 2016, 11:14:04 PM
Pragtige voorbeeld van 'n Verskuilde Titel. Spanwerk uit die boonste rakke  :notworthy:
Title: Re: Werk sonder naam...
Post by: Ans Botha on September 29, 2016, 08:39:03 AM
Baie mooi goed gedoen hier julle spannetjie