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Kom skryf saam in jou eie plekkie => Kom deel jou woordwerke => Louis se plek => Topic started by: Louis on May 14, 2013, 07:25:18 PM

Title: Candle of me
Post by: Louis on May 14, 2013, 07:25:18 PM

Candle of me

Burn…
          burn      tiny brittle wick
          of this, my candle flame
          wax not your line too lightly
          lest not your light shall gain
          snuff out the plans of evil wind
          set guards afore the window pane
          gather forthwith my waxes burned
          and mold of me another, the same
That  I…
          should burn forever…


        © Louis

Title: Re: Candle of me
Post by: PM on May 15, 2013, 07:16:12 AM

Baie goed geskryf.  Dankie dat jy weer van jou werk met ons kom deel Louis.  Is daar nog iets?

Title: Re: Candle of me
Post by: Angelica on May 18, 2013, 03:24:48 PM

Wow, Louis, dis baie mooi.
Jy's stil en wanneer iets wel tot hier die pad vind, is dit altyd voortreflik.

Title: Re: Candle of me
Post by: PM on May 19, 2013, 02:55:15 PM

Ek het die hoofletters verander, help asseblief en sê of julle saamstem. 

Candle of me

Burn…          
           burn      tiny brittle wick          
           of this, my candle flame          
           wax not your line too lightly          
           lest not your light shall gain          
           snuff out the plans of evil wind          
           set guards afore the window pane          
           gather forthwith my waxes burned          
           and mold of me another, the same
That  I…          
           should burn forever…


         © Louis Weka

Title: Re: Candle of me
Post by: Louis on June 03, 2013, 09:15:29 PM

nes jy daar se....ek het dit sommer reggemaak

Title: Re: Candle of me
Post by: PM on June 03, 2013, 11:03:28 PM

Ek het kennis geneem.