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Title: when loved ones walk
Post by: Jeannedarc on May 18, 2011, 05:04:24 PM
When loved ones walk


Are we, the living
The only to brave
The living world?

Are we the living
Capable of seeing
A departed loving soul?

As I'm sitting
In the dead of night
Contemplating, thinking

In the barest of light
I am sitting at the table
Reading, drinking, thinking

Then, in the smoking room
The subtlest movement
Catches mine eye

Sitting on the settee
In the smoking room
A gossamer thin shadow

Is it a dearly departed spirit
A dearest friend, a loved one
saying one last final 'bye?

Or is it
Imagination
Playing with mine eye?
Title: Re: when loved ones walk
Post by: Angelica on May 19, 2011, 02:20:37 AM
Will we ever know? Interesting topic. Very good poem.
Title: Re: when loved ones walk
Post by: PM on May 19, 2011, 06:39:19 AM
'n Mooi gedig Natalie.  Dankie vir die deel.