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Offline Angelica

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Werk sonder naam...
« on: May 21, 2013, 07:06:17 PM »
The rays of light playfully tints your hair in bronze flames, dancing in the midst of dark shadows in between.  I reach out to touch the sparkling flow of wild fire, red streams of bouncing locks.  They come and go in rhythmic interpretations of your gracious body as you move in tandem with the wind.  And I am blown away by you…..
and by the wind

©Cornelis
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Re: Werk sonder naam...
« Reply #1 on: May 22, 2013, 06:55:18 AM »
Sun dance?
Om te weet is om te verstaan.

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Re: Werk sonder naam...
« Reply #2 on: May 22, 2013, 08:20:49 AM »
Besonders mooi geskryf en ek lief PM se voorstel vir die titel.

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Re: Werk sonder naam...
« Reply #3 on: May 22, 2013, 09:41:36 AM »
Sun Dance

The rays of light
playfully tints your hair in bronze flames,
dancing in the midst of dark shadows in between.  
I reach out to touch the sparkling flow of wild fire,
red streams of bouncing locks.  
They come and go in rhythmic interpretations
of your gracious body
as you move in tandem with the wind,  
and I am blown away by you….. and by the wind.

©Cornelis
Om te weet is om te verstaan.

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Re: Werk sonder naam...
« Reply #4 on: May 22, 2013, 06:09:26 PM »
Excellent!!!
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Re: Werk sonder naam...
« Reply #5 on: May 25, 2013, 10:11:00 AM »
Dankie julle, ek waardeer, wonder net wat dink Cornelis daarvan. 
Om te weet is om te verstaan.

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Re: Werk sonder naam...
« Reply #6 on: May 27, 2013, 11:40:22 AM »
Hi, Die titel sun dance is mooi. dankie. so aanvaar.
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Re: Werk sonder naam...
« Reply #7 on: May 27, 2013, 02:13:44 PM »
Wow, ek wens dit was so maklik om my eie werk te benoem.  Die gedigte het eintlik sommer self die titels gekies, dit is uitstekend. 
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Re: Werk sonder naam...
« Reply #8 on: September 28, 2016, 11:14:04 PM »
Pragtige voorbeeld van 'n Verskuilde Titel. Spanwerk uit die boonste rakke  :notworthy:

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Re: Werk sonder naam...
« Reply #9 on: September 29, 2016, 08:39:03 AM »
Baie mooi goed gedoen hier julle spannetjie