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Offline Louis

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days gone by
« on: October 04, 2011, 10:01:41 PM »

Eyes like hazel pools of crystal sky
fade to recent past
Feint whispers of your body scent
still linger on my mind
Nuances of your enchanting voice
still haunt the ears divide
The reverb of your laughter
echo’s down the canyons of my soul

Yet, what I miss the most of all
is you…
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Re: days gone by
« Reply #1 on: October 05, 2011, 08:32:09 AM »
Dit was lekker om weer 'n gedig raak te lees.  Hierdie is 'n pragtige gedig. 
The reverb of your laughter
echo’s down the canyons of my soul

Ek gryp toe my "ingelse woordboek" en soek faint en feint en ja sowaar, dit het 'n dubbel spelling. 
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Offline Angelica

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Re: days gone by
« Reply #2 on: October 07, 2011, 10:27:45 PM »
'eyes like hazel pools of crystal sky'
tears that linger and will never dry

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Re: days gone by
« Reply #3 on: October 09, 2011, 08:51:32 AM »
Eendag as ek groot is gaan ek ook so mooi skryf!   :bootyshake:
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